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GenCon Vol.2 by ~7UR:icon7UR:


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Submitted: February 14
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Same company as the last one just a different version what you guys think is best?

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~BartZt:iconBartZt: Feb 14, 2008, 11:00:17 AM
Oh am I first ? Yeah :D LOVE IT !

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~7UR:icon7UR: Feb 14, 2008, 11:02:35 AM
lol well done you properly will be the only one :)

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~aetherfunk:iconaetherfunk: Feb 14, 2008, 11:04:19 AM
In the middle of the (sun?) you have the red object with an outline.

I personally feel that outlines give a too uniform look, and I always manually create an outline. (like a white object underneath the red one) And then have it touch in places and so on. View my logo's for a hint of what I mean.

I think that would improve this a lot, but it is very good as it is!

Also, your type is either too small, or needs to be more bold. At a first glance I don't see the type at all.

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~worC:iconworC: Feb 14, 2008, 1:23:39 PM
First one is far more better than this one IMO :nod:

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~RealVarn:iconRealVarn: Feb 14, 2008, 1:40:53 PM
in my opinion, the first one is better than this one ;)
but its also cool^^
~Dr-Mastermind:iconDr-Mastermind: Feb 14, 2008, 2:11:43 PM
i think this is better than the other, the first one is more generic, this is something you'll relate only to "genesis". the only critic would be that maybe there are to many "flames" under the "sun". maybe a little simpler.

Nice Work

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~7UR:icon7UR: Feb 14, 2008, 2:38:27 PM
thanks for the feed back some great tips, thank you ill give them ago :)

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