Much better man. Still cool design.
But sorry me for some more suggestions:
It seems to me that you specially increase space between words "few against many" to place Ū like dot upon i. And this bring that urbaine transform to urbalne and divide sentence to the 3 separate words.
I don't know word "urb" and "aine" so is there a reason to colour "urbaine" in two different ways? May be make it horizontally